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Come get it

Come get it

Drawing Drawing \ Figure | 02/09/06 @953 | Daequitas | Comments critiques (48) | Views views (1914)


Come get it
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hi guys those who follow my crappy work can already tell that i have been to a meeting once more

used blue ball point pen on regular photocopy paper and then touched up with PS

total of 4 hours

something for you to chew on till i get my new piece posted
hope u like it

Comment and critiques are welcome as always
 
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Avatar Wysiwyg

 02/09/06 @962

First! (going to write a review)
 
Avatar Daequitas

 02/09/06 @976

wow a review from you
thnx man

and for the kind words too

that front leg bothers me too but didnt want to touch my original lines in PS
will correct it as i paint it (oops here goes a spoiler :p)
 
boguzkan

 02/09/06 @977

very strong heroine
liked her strength

+5 sorry my max
 
Avatar Andy--Jones

 02/09/06 @979

These ball point pictures are getting better. I love the way she is fighting agaimst the wind. I also like the style you adopted for the trees and teh way the snow has drifted up the trunks. This would look ace as a finished colour piece.
 
pitch

 02/09/06 @982

abicim red sonja yengeye selamlar
ya bazen senin cizimlerini gorunce ben kimin kardesiyim demeden duramiorum
ben nie cizemiom boole

well and i am to be your brother right, but why cant i draw like you bro???

+7
 
hildakeskinay

 02/09/06 @983

well done
+5
 
tequitas

 02/09/06 @985

this one i liked
+5
 
Avatar Daequitas

 02/09/06 @990

thnx boguzkan she wields an long sword and a falcihon she has to be strong

andy thnx man i will try to do just with its painting

olm ne bicim askersin sen yatsana vatani kim kolluyor sen nette gezerken sende ciziyosun ya olm ama pratik eksiklign var seninde benim gibi

thxn hildakeskinay

thnx tequitas
 
Avatar sosh

 02/10/06 @013

wow men.... justa a blue pencil.... you are awesome...
i really enjoy this piece... is very dinamic... very.... cinematographic (creo ke asi es en ingles)....
my only but is that is too much white in the bottom.... but is no big deal...
keep the good work..
bye
 
Avatar OnPix-Artist

 02/10/06 @016

Great work !
 
Avatar piciART

 02/10/06 @060

Cool drawing!;)
 
Avatar Fyralath

 02/10/06 @102

Great work!
 
Avatar graysun

 02/10/06 @150

Hey Daequitas, another meeting huh? As usual, very cool drawing. Your style adds lots of energy and the trees receding into the background are very cool (the trees period just kick ass). Down at the bottom of the page near the hilt there is a line of schmoots that looks like it was leftover from the original scan. Easy clean up of course, just wanted to let you know. Anyways, great job. Keep it up. :)
 
Avatar slickgreekgeo

 02/10/06 @380

Very strong concept. I'd really like to see this incorporated into a painting though. +8 keep it going!
 
Avatar Kaduflyer

 02/10/06 @477

You got the dynamic on the girl just about perfect....lovely sense of movement and weight...I can 'see' where she's been and can 'feel' where she's heading within the frame...

The guy's arm and sword work well compositionaly, framing the girl and echoing her movement...but there is little joy to be found in the linework that makes up the hand and sword. At this magnitude and this close to the viewer it needs to be perfect and, more importantly the linework needs to be smoother and cleaner to give some contrast to the more distant elements.

Both your inkwork and colour work continue to improve...which is great....if you can combine the best elements from the two discplines you're gonna be an artist to be reckoned with!
:)
 
Avatar lolita

 02/10/06 @480

hey hey, really great!!!!
nice dynamic!
 
Avatar Grafiker

 02/10/06 @692

güzel is ellerine saglik :)
 
Avatar Daykan

 02/10/06 @730

Amazing!! great work , master!
 
Avatar Cigaro

 02/10/06 @753

dynamic and with an interesting perspective...cool stuff
 
Avatar cheeez3

 02/11/06 @434

This is one of your works i got to like!!!! Improving work man! I cant comment anymore i can see what they saw.

Keep it up!

+8/9
 
Avatar addicted2macs

 02/12/06 @040

Hey, man. Sorry for getting around to this so late :)

You're really taking things to the next level.

Hmmm, what can I say that hasn't been said...?

I like the strong "V" motion reflected in the female as well as the arm and sword in the foreground. It gives a good sense of depth. I'd agree that the hand and arm need a little more attention, being such a prominent element in the foreground. In terms of line weight, think of varying the line weight a little more, and in more appropriate ways. For instance, the outline of the hand and sword carries the same weight as the female figure's outline. If her lines were a little lighter, or the hand/sword heavier, there would be a greater sense of depth and balance.

I'm really enjoying the trees--I've got a thing for trees. Nice job with the minimalist coloring, as well. I like the fade technique from ball point blue to white.
 
Avatar Daequitas

 02/12/06 @987

onpix-artist, piciart, fayrlath, cheeez3, lolita, tuna, daykan thnx guys and gals glad you liked it

sosh, graysun, addicted2macs, kaduflyer ,slickgreekgeo thnx for the constructive comments and crits much appreciated
 
onurkoldas

 02/13/06 @547

incredible work! I like what you have drawn. You have a gift Man :) . Use it more.But if your drawings are the mirror of your heart , you are very wild man.
:)
i am waiting to see your new drawings. Keep in draw TaZ MaN.

my score : 5 / 5
 
Avatar BenF

 02/15/06 @422

Great mouvment impression

8/9 for me :)
 
Avatar elf

 02/15/06 @590

good composition. but unfinished work;) +5
 
Avatar Daequitas

 02/15/06 @721

thnx benf
 
Avatar Daequitas

 02/15/06 @835

thnx elif
for a finished work you should see my wolverine enraged piece then
 
Avatar Mihai

 02/16/06 @087

very nice composition and technique, but I have to ask, why purple?
 
Avatar Daequitas

 02/16/06 @307

thnx for the nice comments mihai
to come to your Q, well i used regular ballpoint blue pen to draw this
and after i scanned it using PS i added only the blowing wind effect and the sky/background
to match the color of the lines i chose a lighter tone of my original lines.. thats why

didnt it go well with the color sheme??
 
Avatar Mihai

 02/16/06 @514

This works very well for me. I just thought that once you loaded it into photoshop you could choose any color for the scene and I was intrigued by your choice. But this very nice as it is.
 
JamJam

 02/16/06 @846

Nice!
 
Avatar Daequitas

 02/16/06 @967

thnx jamjam :)
 
Avatar rychelander

 02/17/06 @701

Red Sonja vs. conan? a meeting you say? I've been in a few of those...
 
Avatar Daequitas

 02/18/06 @032

well who can say no to such a face off

and those meetings can be such a muse right
 
Avatar bluewaterkidd

 02/18/06 @843

THIS IS HOT!
 
Avatar Nilesh

 02/18/06 @870

oh my, very very nice work
 
Avatar Daequitas

 02/19/06 @889

thnx bluewaterkid and nilesh
glad you liked it
 
canisi

 02/20/06 @850

brrrrrr cok soguk canisi yaaa
 
burakovat

 02/20/06 @878

superrrrrrr
 
Avatar ZedoCaixao

 03/24/06 @272

great technique!

+9/9
 
Avatar Daequitas

 03/31/06 @695

thnx zedacaixao ( wow hard-to-pronounce nick you got here :p)
 
Avatar owger

 06/15/06 @346

cok begendim superrr tebrik ederim
 
Avatar Daequitas

 06/20/06 @336

tesekkurler owger
elimizden geldigince ugrasioz iste :p
 
Avatar JESR

 07/30/06 @862

no more coments. +10/10
 
Onurhan

 11/30/06 @542

just in time for the hyborian age Conan Game
loved this one too
 
Avatar BCarbonero

 12/07/06 @303

great piece is so cold really nice draw full of intention. Great job (thumbup)
 
Avatar BlackKitty

 04/06/07 @956

cool composition, lots of depth here. Her pose is great, you caught her in mid-movement, which adds to the tension in the piece!
 
Avatar Daequitas

 06/11/07 @487

thnx JSR, Onurhan, BCarbonero and BlackKitty

i really like this piece myself too
and to think it was born during a meeting it really means alot that you like it
 
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Avatar Wysiwyg

 01/01/70 @124

Concept:

Strong

Technical Skill:

Very strong

Impact/impression:

Very strong
Pros:
Atmospheric perspective
Tension, a cinematic feel that is lacking in most submissions these days...far from an ordinary pinup
Fantastic attention to detail
You actually included the figures in the environment...typically people will paint falling snow everywhere but in front of their character's face 8o
Cons:
I know this is a pen so mistakes will be made (unless you cleaned it up in PS) but the girl doesn't seem like she's standing there...more like she's been placed there. I think it's her foward foot thats irking me.

Try varying your line weight, as of right now it's pretty universal.
Overall opinion/feedback:
4 hours...I hate you. :p

But I must say that one of my earlier (and best) pen works was pretty quick. I think perhaps it's knowing there is no erasing that prompts you to work faster, and even better as you don't concern yourself with every stroke being a mistake or not.

All I can say is that it's a shame it took you this long to really get involved in art...keep it up. Once you get your painting skills figured out you'll be going places for sure.
 
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GFXuser name:
   Daequitas
Full Name:
  Burak Ahmet Gayretli
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Birthdate:
  08/26/1972 (35)
Country:
  Turkey
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